Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?

The relative success of different
country
is usually defined in economic terms. I think it is not the only thing to asses a
country
. In my opinion, there are
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
important things
such
as
education
and good
environment
.
Firstly
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
want to say that standard of
education
, health, and individual human rights certainly be considered when measuring a
country
’s status. A good
education
system is important for the development of any nation. With
great
Suggestion
a great education
education
in schools, colleges, and universities, they can produce the best quality of future generations of workers. Healthcare provision is
also
an indicator of the standard of living within a
country
,
this
can be measured by looking at average life expectancy rates and availability of medical services.
Secondly
, the good
environment
can plays
Suggestion
can play
important role
Suggestion
an important role
important roles
. Any
country
cannot consider
it self
reflexive from of "it"
itself
at
top
Suggestion
the top
if it lacks in healthier citizens and has unsafe
environment
to live in.
For example
, if the
environment
has a lot of
trashes
Suggestion
trash
in any places,
this
can become a disease to many people, not only in their own
country
but can affect to another
country
.
Moreover
, if the government
do not take
Suggestion
does not take
steps to
migitate
lessen or to try to lessen the seriousness or extent of
mitigate
crime in the
country
and it keeps people in fear. So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think, all these factors highly count while measuring
country
’s success. In conclusion, The economic growth reflects
country’s prosperity
Suggestion
the country’s prosperity
, but the other factors
such
as
education
and food
environment
should
also
be considered. But
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would
agrue
present reasons and arguments
argue
agree
agreed
that the standard of a
country
’s
education
system is the best measure of its success.
Submitted by Michelle Angelina on

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  • gross domestic product (GDP)
  • holistic approach
  • subjective well-being
  • quality of life
  • human development index (HDI)
  • green economy
  • technological prowess
  • social cohesion
  • equality and equity
  • cultural vitality
  • political transparency
  • judicial efficacy
  • civil liberties
  • progress indicators
  • societal prosperity
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