Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?
The relative success of different
country
is usually defined in economic terms. I think it is not the only thing to asses a country
. In my opinion, there are another
important things not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
such
as education
and good environment
.
Firstly
, i
want to say that standard of refers to the speaker or writer
I
education
, health, and individual human rights certainly be considered when measuring a country
’s status. A good education
system is important for the development of any nation. With great
Suggestion
a great education
education
in schools, colleges, and universities, they can produce the best quality of future generations of workers. Healthcare provision is also
an indicator of the standard of living within a country
, this
can be measured by looking at average life expectancy rates and availability of medical services.
Secondly
, the good environment
can plays
Suggestion
can play
important role
. Any Suggestion
an important role
important roles
country
cannot consider it self
at reflexive from of "it"
itself
top
if it lacks in healthier citizens and has unsafe Suggestion
the top
environment
to live in. For example
, if the environment
has a lot of trashes
in any places, Suggestion
trash
this
can become a disease to many people, not only in their own country
but can affect to another country
. Moreover
, if the government do not take
steps to Suggestion
does not take
migitate
crime in the lessen or to try to lessen the seriousness or extent of
mitigate
country
and it keeps people in fear. So i
think, all these factors highly count while measuring refers to the speaker or writer
I
country
’s success.
In conclusion, The economic growth reflects country’s prosperity
, but the other factors Suggestion
the country’s prosperity
such
as education
and food environment
should also
be considered. But i
would refers to the speaker or writer
I
agrue
that the standard of a present reasons and arguments
argue
agree
agreed
country
’s education
system is the best measure of its success.Submitted by Michelle Angelina on
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