The percentage of obese children in Vietnam has been increasing in recent years. What are the causes and effects of this disturbing trend?

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Nowadays, the percentage of
obesity
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is becoming more and more popular in the world as well as in Vietnam, especially in children. There are many causes of
childhood
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obesity
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and its consequences. The
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cause
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of
childhood
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obesity
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is an inappropriate eating habit. Children often tend to eat too much fast food that contains a large amount of grease
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as fried chicken, fried sausages and drink sparkling water rather than eating fruits and green vegetables.
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, the inactivity of children is
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the
cause
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of children suffering from
obesity
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. Many children who have a habit of preferring to stay at home watching movies and playing games
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of going out to play or doing exercises can
cause
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excess fat to build up in the body. And the final
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is influenced by psychological or emotional factors. Many studies have shown that the lack of parental care and education in early
childhood
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is a factor leading to the risk of
obesity
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. From these causes,
childhood
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obesity
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has had a significant
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effect
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,
obesity
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makes children complex about their appearance. Sometimes children will feel less confident in their bodies when they go out or even be joked around
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with
friends, which will make them passive, lonely or depressed.
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,
obesity
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makes children suffer from dangerous diseases
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as gastrointestinal, cardiovascular,
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, ...
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, obese children often start puberty early, so it will inhibit the height growth of children as adults if they are not treated early. In short,
obesity
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has a lot of consequences for children so every parent should treat it as soon as possible to help the children have a good life and health.
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