Many parents today do not spend much time with their children. Why is this? Does this affect parents or children more?

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These days it is becoming increasingly common for parents to spend less and less time with their children. In my opinion,
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is because of some distinctly modern distractions and has a far greater effect on children. Both parents and children are vulnerable to today’s consumer electronics. In the past, parents and children might have been distracted by television or a good
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likely to play a board game together or go for a walk.
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started to change with the advent of the internet and portable devices. Many children only care about using their phone or tablet to play games or watch Netflix. Parents are
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addicted to games, entertainment and the allure of social media.
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inclination towards passive entertainment persists even when taking their children out because though parents are physically present, phones often demand most of their attention.
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primarily impacts children as they are more impressionable. Research has shown that the majority of an individual’s personality and habits are formed early in life. If a parent neglects a child in favour of their own
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they are likely to either act out seeking attention or withdraw into their own shell. The child in question might lack not only the
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essential for a healthy upbringing, but
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assume and repeat the negative behaviours of their role models. Many children overcompensate for their parent’s implicit rejection by numbing themselves by retreating into books, television, YouTube, social media or whatever will give them the attention they crave.
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long-cultivated trauma can even follow them throughout adulthood. In conclusion, the growth of consumer electronics is the source of parental neglect and it mainly impairs the mental health of children. Parents must take it on themselves today to find ways to counter the injurious implications of trading their children’s well-being for a sustained glance at a screen.
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