Many parents today do not spend much time with their children. Why is this? Does this affect parents or children more?

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In these days, healthy proportion of parents spend their time not with their children.
This
is mainly because of making money for survival. I think, both parents and children are highly likely to be affected
from
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by
crime
,
for instance
. Most of
parents
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the parents
have jobs, as result their kids become alone. The reason why their parents work, I guess they are trying to gain more money in order to have flourishing future.
For example
, to make opportunities
to
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for
their children to get a tertiary education or set up a family business. Another example is that, every
parents
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parent
are willing to give bright future and they never tend to neglect their children, I think. Even some parents work over-time because they do not want to
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
their source of income.
Moreover
, their children may be spoiled and have exorbitant numbers of demands, buying a computer or bicycle,
for instance
. In most countries,
majority
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the majority
of youngsters and teenagers commit a
crime
due to negligence towards them. We can not blame only them, because their parents are
also
guilty. Children who are lacking enough attention, they opt for
react
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reacting
negatively to their parents by leaving a home or turning into
dark side
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the dark side
for example
,
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
crime
is their way to avenge from their parent for their own sake. For every single broken law can cost an arm and a leg for their parents, I think. Because every time when kids are
violate
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violating
the law, punishments are given to their parents. In the USA, if youth
commited
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
crime
and they are under age of sending them to
prisons
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prison
, their parents do it for them. To conclude, making money can be beneficial for
families but
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families, but
parents must not leave their kids at home alone. They should spend time with them not to change attitude to life of kids, In my view.
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