Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often believed by some people that all wild animals should be preserved, while others believe that only a few of them should be protected. In my opinion, all animals have rights to survive in
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world, so all of them should be saved.
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explain reasons for protecting all those wildlife,
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secondly why
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secondly, why
only couple of them have to be protected, followed up with a logical conclusion. On the one hand, wild lives are our part of eco-system and they have equal rights as human have to exist on
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Earth. Because of the exploit and overuse of natural resources by humans, many wild animals are in danger.
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, many of them are killed to fulfil human needs like clothes, shoes and bags.
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, thousands of crocodiles are being killed to manufacture leather bags, because of which they are endangered. If there are no wild animals in our eco-system, it will be hard to fulfil all those needs and wants, and will be very difficult to maintain the balance between natural resources and human habitat.
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, the preservation of those faunas could be a threat to human exist.
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to say, to preserve all wild animals large area of land and forests are required, which may impact on the population of human beings.
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, it can cost an arm and a leg to save all wild animals on the Earth.
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, international organizations like UNICEF and UN have donated and spent a huge amount of money to save endangered species. In conclusion,
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it harms human existence and is expensive to preserve all of the wild animals, it is very important to protect
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species to maintain our ecosystem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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