You recently stayed at your friends's place to look after the house while he/she is away. you accidently damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to your friend. in your lettter you should describe what the accident was explain when it happened. suggest how you damage can be fixed.
Dear Rahul,
I am writing
this
email to apologize for the damage, I did to your house during my stay. It was my responsibility to look after the home when you went on your business trip to Canada. I was working in a kitchen and, accidently I broke the juicer by dropping it down on the floor.
It was around 10:00 a.m. when I was busy with some household chores. I felt hungry and, tried to use a blender to make fresh fruit juice. Before that I was frying some potato veggies and my hands were oily. Therefore
, a juicer slipped from my hand when I tried to hold it and, fell on the surface.
Lastly
, without being sorry, I have nothing else to fix this
problem. If you want, I can transfer some money so you can purchase a new one. I am feeling so bad at the moment.
I am looking forward to getting your response.
Yours lovingly,
Talwinder Singh Dhillon.Submitted by sandhuarsh1320 on
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Task Achievement
To improve your Task Achievement score, ensure you fully address all parts of the prompt. While you have described the accident and suggested a solution, you could enhance your letter by clearly stating when it happened in relation to the current time (e.g., 'last week') and providing more detail on how the damage can be fixed beyond just offering to pay.
Coherence and Cohesion
For Coherence and Cohesion, your letter is well-organized and progresses logically. However, you could improve by making better use of linking words and phrases to help the reader more clearly follow your explanations and suggestions. Additionally, strive to vary your sentence structures to create a more engaging and fluid narrative.