Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is undeniable that in the modern-day,
technology
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has come so far, its effect has a
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of impact on our
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,
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as choices of career and accommodation.
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, there are some people think that nowadays all of us have too many choices. From my point of view, I do not agree with that idea for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.
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with, nowadays, there is an increasing number for a
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of new young adults that are well prepared for the jobs in their future, while the places of working is still the same.
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, people do not have too many choices about it, and they must have a literally intense competition to get the good work.
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, the medical students of mine have to study for more than 10 hours per day to get accepted in the workplace by an exam.
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, the need of the career in
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period tends to be specific for the people who have an essential skill in
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because the idea at the present time is “If we have the officer who has a good skill in
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, our company will be successful easily”.
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,
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plays an important role in our
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in many aspects and the career too. So, people do not have many choices and have to make them up to date as always.
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, the choices of accommodation dramatically decreased than in the past by the increasing amount of people. Back
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, people could buy or rent for their own place anywhere, but nowadays are genuinely hard by its number of the citizens and demand.
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, a
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of people want to live in the urban town because of its high
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that can make them feel comfortable in their
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.
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, they wittingly spend a
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of money on the price, which is really expensive because they do not have many ways to choose, and if they want to live in the downtown, they have to spend a
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of their money. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the idea that people do not have many choices in these days since it seems to me that the significant growth in amount of residents and quality of
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have a
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of effect on our
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, and all of those are currently decreasing our choices to live in every day
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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