In the future, people may have to live on other planets. Some think that is therefore important to spend money researching other planets such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People are highly likely to live in other planets in

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coming years. In order to do

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, there should be conducted more researches about various planets like Mars and more fund should be invested in

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field. I am not in agreement with

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thought, because it has side effects to the Earth and it would be insensible to consider about other planets, whereas, ours getting worse. Nowadays, due to the advancements of astronomy and physics, the majority of

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scientists

believe that, the humanity will probably live on other planets after some periods.

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would cause to some problematic issues, increasing numbers of noxious gases and other problems,

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. It is obvious that, there are no natural resources in other planets, to transport them, it requires more fuel and funds.

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, it is not a problem, the main drawback of

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, when the rocket is operating, there will be gases which are causing to extinction of animals or effect to natural settings.

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, catastrophic damages will emerge after

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and eventually the humanity would suffer from radiation.

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, in

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day and age, our planet is facing with troubles

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as global warming and pollution on air and in water. In

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20 years, these issues have caused to millions of deaths and no one can figure out the measurement for these hardships.

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, many countries consider only about

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roads,

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of dealing with environmental difficulties in the Earth.

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, to tackle

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problem, the government authority should adopt new strict rule to control environmental changes.

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, those regulations have to be

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scared

for people not to violate the nature. The recent research conducted by the scientists of NASA proved that, when the rocket is launched and it would damage ozone layer by penetrating its some parts. To conclude, it would be beneficial to learn about the life of the planets.

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, it is nothing but a thought, if the situation on the Earth is not changed, in my opinion.

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