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Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage

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There are few masters who believe that it is more beneficial to start to learn a foreign
language
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 in primary
school
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instead
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 of secondary
school
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. It is important for a child to learn his or her native
language
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 to communicate easily which needs to be taught in primary
school
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.
Also
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, foreign
language
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initially
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 is of no
use
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 to a kid.
Hence
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 there is hardly any advantage of learning a new
language
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 in primary
school
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 In a primary
school
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 the kid is given knowledge about the basics of all subjects.
Hence
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 it would be more beneficial for a child if they teach their regional
language
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 as
this
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 would help them to interact with their neighbouring people more easily.
In addition
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 to
this
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 learning two different
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language
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languages
 at the same time would create burdens
on
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for
 the child.
Thus
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 the student will not be able to learn either of the two languages properly. Adding to
this
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, the new
language
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 will be of no
use
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 to the kid, as he would mostly
use
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 his mother tongue for his day to day conversation. The need of foreign
language
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 comes only if one wants to go abroad for some better prospects.
Hence
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 it should be included in secondary schooling where the student can choose the new
language
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 he wants to learn depending on his future plans.
For example
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, the knowledge of the French
language
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 would be of no
use
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 to a citizen of India. To summarize, learning a foreign dialect is not a necessity and
hence
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 not to be taught in primary
school
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 as it would only increase the pressure of the students.
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