You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing regarding the training program

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going to happen in the United Kingdom on the 15th of October. I am one of the trainees in

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event and I would consider myself a good applicant for the position of

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social event organiser. I have a keen interest in

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role because I got a bachelor's in event organiser

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year from Algoma University and I would really like to learn some practical tasks at a higher level.

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, I have limited knowledge regarding

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opening

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as, what kind of responsibilities an organiser has to deal with and is it a volunteer post or company will pay for the work. I would request you to provide me with some sort of information related to

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position.

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, I would share my experience as well. I have organised a couple of charity events

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year. The recent one was held at Brampton City Centre and was accompanied by Flower City Committee members on the 18th of September. I hope you will consider my request and come up with a positive response. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Kaur.

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Task Response

Consider providing more specific examples of your achievements or experiences related to the role.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea to improve single idea per paragraph criteria.

Task Response

The letter maintains a polite and formal tone, suitable for a professional context.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter is well-structured with clear paragraphs and logical progression of ideas.

Greeting and Closing

The writer effectively uses a respectful greeting and closing, enhancing formality.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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