You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing regarding the training program
that is
going to happen in the United Kingdom on the 15th of October. I am one of the trainees in
this
event and I would consider myself a good applicant for the position of
the
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social event organiser. I have a keen interest in
this
role because I got a bachelor's in event organiser
last
year from Algoma University and I would really like to learn some practical tasks at a higher level.
Moreover
, I have limited knowledge regarding
this
opening
such
as, what kind of responsibilities an organiser has to deal with and is it a volunteer post or company will pay for the work. I would request you to provide me with some sort of information related to
this
position.
In addition
, I would share my experience as well. I have organised a couple of charity events
this
year. The recent one was held at Brampton City Centre and was accompanied by Flower City Committee members on the 18th of September. I hope you will consider my request and come up with a positive response. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Kaur.
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Task Response
Consider providing more specific examples of your achievements or experiences related to the role.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea to improve single idea per paragraph criteria.
Task Response
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone, suitable for a professional context.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter is well-structured with clear paragraphs and logical progression of ideas.
Greeting and Closing
The writer effectively uses a respectful greeting and closing, enhancing formality.
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