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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Fact cramming is seen as the essential method to succeed in educational pursuits.
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 is true as there is limited time for one
toread
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to read
 and comprehend,
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 the number of subject or course materials are voluminous for a student to aim to understand all at once. Memorising important parts of
text books
according to or characteristic of a casebook or textbook; typical
textbooks
 would be key to understanding concepts and definitions faster. A huge percentage of teachers and lecturers like certain definitions and concepts repeated
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 by
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 as dictated and would not accept
personal defination
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a personal definition
personal definition
 by students. Students just want to pass with as little hassle as possible and are willing to regurgitate
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 for
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 what the Lecturer taught. The belief is that understanding the concept will come later. They want to be seen as knowledgeable and limit rambling phrases getting straight to the point.
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 is different from taking the additional time it will take to understand the concept of the subject matter.
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 is
disadvantagous
constituting a disadvantage
disadvantageous
 as the student is pressed for time and he has limited days to exam.
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