Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include What the gift is Why you chose it How it will be delivere

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Dear Aman, Owning a dream house is something everyone aspires to. I am thrilled to have helped you achieve your dream house. Congratulations once again! I regret not being able to attend your housewarming party, but I would like to send a sectional sofa for your new home. I hope you will accept it wholeheartedly.

This

set, with its seven seats and table, would be a perfect fit for your spacious lobby. I chose

this

set as it is very stylish and elegant standard quality.

Apart from

this

, it is easy to assemble all the instructions that come with

this

Although

I do not want to mention it, the price was reasonable.

Moreover

, it is brown, which is your favourite colour. I hope you love it. Well, I ordered

this

online.

Therefore

, the Company will directly deliver it to the door on the 21 July. Warm wishes for your house. I will hang out at your place soon. Regards, Parm

Submitted by parminderbitti3 on Wed Jul 31 2024

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task achievement

Great job on addressing all parts of the task! Include some additional details about your relationship with Aman or anecdotes to make the letter even more personal.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a clear structure by ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a single idea. Organizing your letter this way makes it even easier to read.

greeting and closing

Your greeting and closing are warm and appropriate for a letter to a friend. It sets a pleasant tone.

logical structure

The letter flows logically from one point to the next, making it easy to follow. You've done a great job with the logical structure.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

160 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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