Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include What the gift is Why you chose it How it will be delivere

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Dear Aman, Owning a dream house is something everyone aspires to. I am thrilled to have helped you achieve your dream house. Congratulations once again! I regret not being able to attend your housewarming party, but I would like to send a sectional sofa for your new home. I hope you will accept it wholeheartedly.
This
set, with its seven seats and table, would be a perfect fit for your spacious lobby. I chose
this
set as it is very stylish and elegant standard quality.
Apart from
this
, it is easy to assemble all the instructions that come with
this
.
Although
I do not want to mention it, the price was reasonable.
Moreover
, it is brown, which is your favourite colour. I hope you love it. Well, I ordered
this
online.
Therefore
, the Company will directly deliver it to the door on the 21 July. Warm wishes for your house. I will hang out at your place soon. Regards, Parm
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task achievement
Great job on addressing all parts of the task! Include some additional details about your relationship with Aman or anecdotes to make the letter even more personal.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear structure by ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a single idea. Organizing your letter this way makes it even easier to read.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are warm and appropriate for a letter to a friend. It sets a pleasant tone.
logical structure
The letter flows logically from one point to the next, making it easy to follow. You've done a great job with the logical structure.
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