Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some individuals believe that vulnerable games should be banned, while some people believe people has a right to play
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without any prohibition. Suggestion
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essay will discuss on both statements and gives an opinion, why Linking Words
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should not be banned.
To commence with, some people think perilous games should not be allowed to play. They might think because it's will kill the people Suggestion
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such
as bungee jumping, skydiving and so on. Linking Words
Moreover
, people believe if Linking Words
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type of jeopardise Linking Words
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then
the number of people who die every year with Linking Words
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sort of sports will be eliminated. Linking Words
For instance
, in Nepal every year, 50% people die because of the participation of people in risky games. That's why people think to mitigate death rate, dangerous Linking Words
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should be prohibited.
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However
, in other hand, some individuals think death is fatal, so we should not ban the Linking Words
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. It's because everybody has right to enjoy with their life by indulging in games in which they are fascinated. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the dangerous Linking Words
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like skydiving, bike stunt and so on can be dangerous, but if people take the precaution, it's not too perilous. Use synonyms
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, to indulged in these types of Linking Words
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people need a license or training so there will not be any bad incidents in their life. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, people can die without playing these types of sports as well, so in the fear of dying, games should not be banned. To exemplify, Linking Words
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year one of the famous Cricketer of Nepal died in cricket Linking Words
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is not dangerous. That's why games should not be banned as everybody has right to play and only the proper precaution should be taken.
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although
many people are in favour of banning vulnerable games, in my opinion, with proper training and precaution people can play if they are interested. Because death is a natural process so it's not the only reason the people die so the games should be allowed to play as it is not compulsory for anyone.Linking Words
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