Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

I hope
this
letter finds you well and I’m writing for your assistance in finding a part-time job in your area because I’m going to immigrate to your country. Actually, I would like to continue my education in
one
of the English-speaking countries for a master’s degree in industrial engineering and as I am very lucky because I was approved by a university called UCLA in your neighbourhood and I should go to University three times a week; Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday and
this
scheme will continue for six months from 9 AM to 5 PM. The truth is that I am short of money and the rent of my apartment is higher than I expected. What is more, without a salary I don’t think, I cannot continue my education and circumstances will be intricate for me in the future.
In other words
, through a good carrier, I can follow my direction which I want to go. For
this
matter, if it is possible, I would like to send my CV to you in order to show or express to employees who are eager to hire a person.
Furthermore
, you can check newspapers every day so as to highlight appropriate occupations which are relevant to my skills and
also
experiences and send the information about them to me for
next
proceedings. I am looking forward to seeing you soon, please let me know if you require any
further
questions about the job. Actually, celebrities in the world have many enthusiasts and
this
matter bring a great feeling of serenity and peace of mind for them in many situations and these are the things they would definitely be fascinated by. What is more, through
this
reputation, they can acquire a lot of money, to illustrate Cristiano Ronaldo is
one
of the most prominent players in football, a man of many talents and
this
person plays in some advertisements,
such
as shampoo Clear and with
this
activity can preserve his fame among people as well as acquiring money.
Furthermore
, these people can produce and supply some commodities with their exclusive brands.
Moreover
, it can be a good opportunity for them so as to take part in the other fields,
one
example of
this
would be Arnold, who is
one
of the well-known actors and
also
a bodybuilder, but he worked as a diplomat in LA several years ago.
On the other hand
, being a celebrity has several demerits which are worth considering.
Firstly
, they cannot live freely in some moments,
for example
, at the time when they want to go to a restaurant, the majority of people are very enthusiastic to take some photos with them and
this
matter can be annoying after several times. In fact,
this
issue can have a negative impact on famous people and
also
their fans due to inappropriate interactions.
Secondly
, most of these people do not have a private life and there are many in paparazzi who think that have right to know everything about their lifestyles without any obstacles and famous people will be irritated by
such
reporters. In conclusion, in my view, celebrities have an important role in keeping their positions and
also
prepare a harmonious atmosphere for themselves in order to use the advantages of their fame
instead
of disadvantages.
Submitted by Hesam Amir on

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  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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