buying things on the internet, such as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The Internet connects all users with the organizations providing our daily

basis

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basis, such

such

as, books, flights, and groceries. In

customers' views

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the customers' views

, the Internet provides us a superb convenience and saves our time for other activities.

Therefore

, it is getting better and more popular for the new generations. Even though

this

middleman has really boosted up the total orders for goods and services from particular shops, the revenues made from the selling drop significantly. In my opinion, the disadvantages in online shopping definitely outweigh the advantages in terms of overall economic.

To begin

with, in the past, the shops sold their

merchandises

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merchandise

directly to the customers. Unfortunately, catching up with the modern trend - establishing new online stores- eventually make

loss

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the loss

of the businesses' total profits. Nowadays, people tend to order them online

instead

.

Hence

, to insist not to join the Internet's platform might not be a good decision these days. The owners would have to pay for both joining fees and orders' fees

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for

the applications, which handle the tasks. Some businesses said to have no yield from selling.

For instance

, the

hotel

manager in my hometown said that he has lost all the benefits to the

hotel

's applications.

Consequently

, he is planning to quit the

hotel

. In fact,

this

is apparently one of the biggest threats in using

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the Internet

.

Secondly

, there were many fake websites, which defined themselves to be the mediators to book

hotel

rooms, flights, and restaurants' seats, that succeeded in beguiling the shoppers to pay for them.

For example

, I was one of their victims, as I was booking for the concert tickets.

As a result

, I have lost thousands

bahts

a small vessel for travel on water

boats

to those thieves, and couldn't get anything back. Surprisingly, there are many counterfeits which have not gone unpunished, and the number of identity thefts is remarkably increasing. To conclude,

although

the citizens may find

Internet's

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aged as

attactive

pleasing to the eye or mind especially through beauty or charm

attractive

addictive

and magnificent, these are absolutely the most horrible dreams to the middle-sized

bussinesses

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

businesses

business

as well as some purchasers. To avoid destroying the economic structure, the network applications must decrease their fees allowing the shops to continue available.