buying things on the internet, such as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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middleman has really boosted up the total orders for goods and services from particular shops, the revenues made from the selling drop significantly. In my opinion, the disadvantages in online shopping definitely outweigh the advantages in terms of overall economic.
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, there were many fake websites, which defined themselves to be the mediators to book Linking Words
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rooms, flights, and restaurants' seats, that succeeded in beguiling the shoppers to pay for them. Use synonyms
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, I was one of their victims, as I was booking for the concert tickets. Linking Words
As a result
, I have lost thousands Linking Words
bahts
to those thieves, and couldn't get anything back. Surprisingly, there are many counterfeits which have not gone unpunished, and the number of identity thefts is remarkably increasing.
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bussinesses
as well as some purchasers. To avoid destroying the economic structure, the network applications must decrease their fees allowing the shops to continue available.a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
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