Students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In today’s complex society,
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controversial issue exists that if postgraduates supported their expenditures spent on their
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themselves,
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tendency would be superior in comparison with free of charge
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of the state. I partially agree with the statement that the full cost of
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should be paid by students.
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and foremost, some people find the quality of
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provided by the government inadequate. More specifically, over the
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few decades, the illiteracy rate is enormously increasing as those local schools are not supplied with indispensable facilities to contribute satisfactory
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to students. The focal reason why free schools are confronting
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crucial predicaments is that the state does not pay attention to the
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system sufficiently. To put in another word, if the majority of students tend to other private schools that capable to teach the curriculum efficiently through all requisite equipment, students can secure more excellent
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which in turn is the clue to obtain great job opportunities in the future.
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, today, the main breadwinner of most families is one person because of the lack of enough workplaces. Thereby, families might have a plethora of financial problems. To be more specific, those parents whose salary are low cannot afford their children's
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payments,
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,
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phenomenon might be inimical to those students’ future careers.
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to say, countries might face, brain gain, which in terms of all aspects is abominable to the economy. By way of conclusion, despite having positive effects of
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inclination,
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, pernicious repercussions are inevitable. I would say if authorities took steps to enhance the
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education
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quality, it would be beneficial to not only families but
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the state.
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