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You have been working in a company for three years, but now wish to leaving job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: • What have you learned while working for the company • Did you enjoyed working there • What are your reasons for leaving the job

#company #three #years #job #manager
Dear Mr Tom, I hope
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 letter finds you in good health and you are
going
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 well. I am writing
this
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that I want to leave my job
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this
 company. Let me explain my situation, first of all, I have learned a lot from working here in the organization for the
last
 three years,
such
 as I learned how to use effective time management techniques.
In addition
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, I really enjoyed working in
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teamwork, especially when meeting new clients. And it was my first job I really liked.
Apart from
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, the reason for my leaving from
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that I received an offer a new modern large organization in my specialty. In light of
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 situation, I would like you to understand me and apply my resignation letter. Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to hearing from you soon Yours sincerely, Linda Grey
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Coherence & Cohesion
Consider using varied sentence structures to enhance readability.
Task Achievement
Ensure to proofread your letter to correct minor typos or grammatical errors for improved clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your letter follows a clear logical structure, making it easy to follow.
Task Achievement
You efficiently conveyed your reasons for leaving, which addresses the task's requirements satisfactorily.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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