As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

There is no doubt that education and the learning
process
has changed
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changed
since the introduction of computers: The search for information has become easier and amusing, and connectivity has expedited the data availability. Though experts systems have made computers more intelligent, they have not yet become a substitute of the human
interaction
in the learning
process
. In my opinion; what can be expected, is a change of the teachers?
role
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Role
but not their disappearance from the classroom. Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with computers. The mere
activity
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act
acts
of touching and exploring
this
device constitutes an enjoyable task for a kid.
This
, accompanied with the relaxing attitude and software interactivity, usually conduce to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher
educational
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education
level; the availability of digital books, simulator and other academic materials, provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that
otherwise
would not be at hand. But,
besides
the increasing complexity and
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of intelligent software, which is usually embedded in the academic digital material, the need of human
interaction
in the learning
process
will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. There is the necessity for a human being to be able to determine what the
specifics
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specific
needs of each individual are. The expertise of a teacher in how to explain and adapt complex concepts to different individuals can hardly be mimicked by a computer, no matter how sophisticated its software is. As computers are becoming a common tool for teaching, teachers should be more aware of their role as guides in the acquisition of knowledge rather than transmitters of facts. They have to be open minded to the changes that are taking
places
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place
, keep updated and serve as a problem
solvers
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solver
in the learning
process
,
thus
allowing students to discover the fact for themselves. To summarize, in my personal view, teachers play and will
(
Accept space
(
) play an important role in the classroom, especially at the primary level. No matter how complex computers become, there will be no replacement for the human
interaction
, but in the way haw
this
interaction
takes place.
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