Some people believe that the government spends too much money on developing space exploration technology. There are many other financial needs that the government should address instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The aerospace technologies are highly developed in major countries

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as, America, India, and China, where overall incomes are tremendous.

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, there are problems which are needed to be improved using large budget.

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, I do agree that other financial needs should be addressed

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of

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expensive technology. To commence with, the space explorations are trivial issues for normal citizens in which the daily basis is more important. There are many people, who don't have any opportunity to occupy the standard elements

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, they are extremely poor.

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kind of troubles must be resolved

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. Even though the research in astronomy and cosmology has benefited various fields of science, why would

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technology flourish while some people have no idea about what science is? The government should support more in people's essential needs.

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, the environmental issues, the education system, and the economic stabilities are more concerned and have a bigger impact on the nation than the space journeys.

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, the astronomical science have wasted the majority of national budget

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the mission

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Accept space

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which cannot be guaranteed the success of them. Many trips organized by the astronauts failed.

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, the rocket in one of the Apollo plans exploded in the middle of the Earth's atmosphere, and that means the loss of money.

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, the government has to weigh the possibility of success and failure in certain projects.

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, it would be better to improve people's lives before the explorations In conclusion,

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the aerospace projects are necessary in many prominent organizations, the survival of the citizens has to be

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concerned

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distributing the financial support. If most of the citizens admit to the presence of a new journey,

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miscellaneous topic can become

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a worldwide consideration

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a new era

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