You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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plays a major role among individuals when it comes to purchase products. Some people buy a product only when the see the

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irrespective of they need it or not. While other only buy when they get the complete

information

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and found worth full impact in their lives. In my opinion,

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create

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creates

impact among humans, by creating

lucrative

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a lucrative

adds that push them to buy those products,

however

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such

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products have no handful

information

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which really make

difference

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a difference

the difference

in one's life.

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for sure intimate individual to buy things. In doing

this

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part, advertising agencies make some emotional or catchy campaigns, so

it is

it's

become tough by individuals to resist and they eventually end up in getting that product.

For example

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, I phone companies exactly know how to target the customer, they highlight some distinctive features that the

last

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version was devoid off, that hit the people and the completely flown off to buy that new phone despite having an older version in hand.

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don’t give

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doesn’t give

thorough

information

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about the new products and individuals must do some research before they purchase.

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, A new night cream by L'Oreal have the two main

ingredient

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ingredients

: vitamin C and vitamin E.

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Instead

of highlighting their useful

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, they are creating

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Suggestion

an advertisement

on to buy two different creams with more cost than buy one with same cost. In conclusion, some school of thought believes that

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the advertisement

is the only source of

information

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while

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

says that

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increasing the sales of products by perusing people. In my opinion, now a day’s

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only way

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the only way

to animate people to buy products

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of providing

information

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that helps people to improve their life.

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

284 words

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