Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Lately, many people have decided to start their own business
instead
of joining a company to work for someone else. Linking Words
That is
because self-employment can provide freedom Linking Words
however
, there are some drawbacks Linking Words
such
as the burden of responsibilities.
To commence with, some individuals choose to be self-employed to have freedom in their work. Linking Words
As a result
, they can determine what office hours will be convenient for them in order to minimize pressure; Linking Words
therefore
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this
will increase the quality of the service that they provide to their customers. Linking Words
For example
, thousands of doctors in Egypt open clinics or medical centres to enhance their working atmosphere, Linking Words
hence
providing their patients with the sufficient care they need.
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On the other hand
, there are disadvantages that come with self-employment Linking Words
such
as increased responsibility. When someone starts a business they will have to go through a period of chaos. The reason for Linking Words
that is
they will have to do multiple jobs until they find someone who is dependable. Linking Words
For instance
, Medical care centres require, Linking Words
in addition
to the business owner who is the doctor, an accountant to manage the finances and a marketer for the advertisement Linking Words
as well as
an HR employee to hire nurses. In most cases, all of these jobs are accomplished by the owner of the centre or the company himself.
In conclusion, Being self-employed is preferable to many citizens these days for the purpose of flexibility in working hours. Linking Words
However
, everything comes with a price as more freedom equals more responsibility.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...