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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factors that influence us. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Everyone cherishes a happy
life
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 be whether it is based on internal or external factors. There is a category of people who believe that people are responsible for their
happiness
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 personally, but there are
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 supporters of the theory that only through external forces and circumstances can a person achieve
happiness
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. In my opinion, a person’s
happiness
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 will always be according to his actions rather than throwing it on all other external factors.
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 with, many individuals believe that reaching blessedness is impossible without satisfaction. In
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reason
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, in many cases, people’s fortunate depends on many external factors,
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 as religion, astrology or absence of economic hardship in the country.
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 to say, citizens of wealthy countries can reach
happiness
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, because they can realize their potential. A good illustration of
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 is Scandinavian countries. According to the World
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 Report in 2018, the most happiest individuals on the planet live in
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 region.
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, many believe that every individual, himself, is responsible for bringing joy to his own
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. It seems logical that a person who is in the pursuit of
happiness
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 will probably keep finding the little moments to stay happy in comparison to the one who always need a big
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 to make himself delighted.
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, people, who enjoy and celebrate every bit of their lives, tend to remain more joyful.
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, a person, who requires a big
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 or achievement to celebrate, seldom gets these chances in his
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.
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, it is perhaps needless to say that a man himself is responsible for bringing jubilation in his
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. To conclude, people may vary in their opinion, but I strongly consider that enjoyment is more a result of the individual's efforts than simply a combination of circumstances. And every individual is responsible to feel satisfied with their own choices and decisions of
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.
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, other objects can be
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 of temporary optimism.
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, if someone's not happy with themselves no other thing can keep them happy for a long period.

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