Some school levers travel or work for a period of time instead of going to university. What are it’s advantages and disadvantages.
Nowadays its becomes trend in students for solo
traveling
or working after school to the act of going from one place to another
travelling
fulfill
their wishes and they extend their future put in effect
fulfil
education
for that this
mindset has both positive and negative repercussions on their life
. Both the notion
will describe well in essay with suitable rationales.
Suggestion
notions
To begin
with after school education
majority of people wants to live their life
with
their own way. Suggestion
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age, all
think
they Suggestion
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were becoming
decision
and start working to get more money for their expenditures which may incline them to some bad activities. Suggestion
a decision
decisions
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example, many
centers
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centres
centre
bit
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a bit
centers
are working for some fraud work which affect the people negatively. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
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Secondly, travel
also
be in trend on this
people
like solo Suggestion
person
traveling
, the act of going from one place to another
travelling
tracking
and many more. At journey on foot, especially in the mountains
trekking
this
age sometime this
activity
become
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becomes
some ones
a human being
someones
life
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do, but
this
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and they puts
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put
are
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are incline
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are inclined
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type of activity
and many case they
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cases, they
cases they
education
and they become little bit
illiterate in terms of Suggestion
a little bit
education
.
On contrary there
are some positive impact of Suggestion
the contrary, there
the contrary there
this
activity
on people, these types of stuffs make person more stable and responsible at this
age of beginning to take responsibility of self and family also
, they will train for future
and easily accepts the problems of Suggestion
the future
them
of them or themselves
their
life
and out from them very politely without any depurations
. something used to beautify
decorations
This
will be only in case when this
activity
done in proper way and proper manner and for short
of time Suggestion
the short
a short
otherwise
it repercussion is very bad.
After discussion both
the notion all Accept comma addition
discussion, both
activity
are done
in limitation is good for Suggestion
is done
life
otherwise
its create many problems.Submitted by jd patel on
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