Some people say that it is necessary to use animals for testing the medicines intended for human beings, others however think it is cruel and unnecessary.Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Sometimes, it is argued that testing medicines on animals is a cruel action. Here, in

this

essay, I will discuss both, the

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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

positives

and the negative side of

this

Firstly

, when some new

medicine

is manufactured, we never know what effect, it will have.

This

must be tested. In some worst

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an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)

scenario

scenarios

, it can kill on whom

this

medicine

is tested. The normal form of new medicines is,

fistly

before anything else

firstly

, it is

first

tested

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10 rats,

then

on 25 rats,

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100 rats. When there are

sucessful

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successful

successfully

results,

secondly

, the same

medicine

is tested on monkeys.

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The

same

procudure

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procedure

procedures

of 10, 25, 100 is carried on. Again, when on monkeys

also

, when there are

sucessful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

and positive results,

thirdly

further

, it is tested on a human being. When

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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

result comes,

then

on 10,

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25 and

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about

100 people it will be tested. When there are

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one after the other

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successful results are found

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human beings

also

then

it will be made common to the public and will be available in the market.

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is the norm. I completely agree with

this

. Rather than having negative effects on human beings, it is always better to be tested on animals. It

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does not

mean that, we are cruel. When some

medicine

is found, it helps lots of living creatures. To conclude, for

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the biggest

the big

gain, loosing minimum and testing on animals is a wise decision.

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Controversial
Ethical considerations
Inhumane
Medical advancements
Alternative methods
Regulations
Animal welfare
Scientific gains
Technological advancements
Animal rights
Experimentation
Insights
Therapies
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