3. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter you should: introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture and say what action you would like the landlord to take.
Dear Mr. John,
I wish to make a complaint about the condition of the furniture. My name is
Princy
, and I have been living in your Correct your spelling
Prince
house
with my family for the last
10 years.
First,
I would like to like to inform you about the main problem with the furniture. Last
year, the basement of the house
was flooded due to
the heavy rain. As a result
, the house
furniture was badly damaged, especially the sofa and chairs. As per our lease rules, you are responsible for taking care of all basic facilities.
Moreover
, I would like to give some suggestions for the future, such
as repairing the exterior wall and cleaning the gutter. So, according to
me, these are the best ways to prevent the house
. I would be very happy if you could repair or exchange the sofa and chairs as soon as possible.
Waiting for a positive reply from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Prinsi PatelSubmitted by pramodv997 on
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task achievement
Ensure that your letter addresses all parts of the task in detail for a complete response.
task achievement
Consider the tone and formality of your letter, making sure it is appropriate to the situation.
coherence cohesion
You may further improve the logical flow by clearly linking sentences and paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
You have used a clear greeting and closing, which is suitable for a formal letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter is structured logically with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
task achievement
You have expressed your concerns clearly and suggested specific actions, which enhances task achievement.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite