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Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.

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There are a large number of museum and
art
 gallery all around the
world especially
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world, especially
 in the developed countries; some of them have
admission
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an admission fee
admission fees
fee
 while others are free of charge. I personally believe that the merits of having
admission
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an admission fee
fee
 outweigh the possible drawbacks. The reasons behind it will be discussed in
this
 essay. It is admitted that the free
admission
 of the museums and
art
 galleries may attract more people to visit them,
nevertheless
 it would not be many as the reason for which Individuals do not go to the museums on
regular basis
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a regular basis
 is not the
admission
fee
 as it is usually not expensive. Most of these citizens are not interested in
art
 or history or they might not have enough time to spend on visiting the museums. A recent publication by Oxford University in an
art
 gallery in the downtown London showed that the number of visitors in the
first
 semester of 2018 when people were charged and the
next
 semester that museum’s guests did not pay money were almost similar.
Therefore
, it is conclusively evident that free
admission
 does not have
considerable role
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a considerable role
 in increasing the sum of fans.
Furthermore
, every museum or
art
 gallery needs
maintenance which
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maintenance, which
 is costly and the governments usually are not able to cover all the expenses.
Hence
, the museums have to find some financial resources to bear the costs. The more practical approach
for
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to
 them is defining an
admission
fee
.
For example
, French authorities announced that the cost of maintenance
for
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of
 Louvre museum is equal to the yearly budget of the ministry of education in France, so there is no other way except charging the visitors. To sum up, most museums and
art
 galleries are mandated to cover their expenses via the
admission
 fees and it seems it does not impact on the number of their guests substantially.
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