Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common.WHAT ARE THE CAUSES? What solutions can you suggest?

PRESENT LIFE HAS BECOME MORE FAST AND HECTIC THAN A DECADE AGO.

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AFFECT THE HEALTH OF THE INDIVIDUALS

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AS DEPRESSION FROM

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. THERE ARE A MYRIAD OF CAUSES AND LESS NUMBER OF SOLUTIONS AVAILABLE TO THE PERSON FOR

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ISSUE.

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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS H0W BEING BUSY ALL THE DAY CAN FORM

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AND HOW

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CONTRIBUTE TO RELASE THE

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AND MAKE AN INDIVIDUAL TENSION FREE. THE PRIME REASON OF INCREASED

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IS THE BUSY LIFE AND NOT GIVING ENOUGH TO THE MIND TO RELAX.

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BUSY MIND UNABLE TO LET THE PERSON SIT FOR A WHILE AND MAKE HIM/HER INTRICATE WITH ALL THE THINGS SURROUNDED.

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CREATS THE MORE TENSION TO COMPLETE THE DAILY TASK AND AT THE END ONE WILL GETS THE MENTAL ILLNESS.

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, THEY DO NOT ORGANISED THE PROPER TIME FOT

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TO RELAX.

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, ACCORDING TO UK UNIVERSITY SURVEY, 70% OF THE PEOPLE HAVING A

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RELATED DISEASE BECAUSE OF THE LACK OF TIME TO ALLOW

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TO RECOVER FORM THE DAILY WORK.

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MENACE WILL BE SOLVED WITH

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PRACTICE. WHEN AN INDIVIDUAL PRACTICE

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, HUMAN

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RELEASE SOME

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RELIEVE HORMONES THAT KEEPS MIND CALM AND FOCUSED.

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CALMESS RESOLVE THE MENTAL PRESSURE AND DISTRIBUTE THE POSITIVITY INNSIDE THE HMAN

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. FOR EXAMPLE, INDIAN MEDICAL COMMITY DID A SURVEY

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YEAR AND REVEALED THAT 60% OF THE INDIAN PUBLIC ARE HEALTHY BECAUSE OFF THE

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TRADITION SINCE THE ANCIENT TIME SPREADED AMONG THE FOLKS. IN CONCLUSION, WHEN YOU HAVE A GOOD HEALTH, NO WORRIES CAN AFFECT YOUR FITNESS LEVEL AND THE YOG IS THE BEST TO DO SO. BUT,

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RELY ON THE INNDIVIDUAL'S THINKING AND THE WAY HE THE SERIOUSENESS OF THE WELLNESS.

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, I SUGGEST THAT IF PEOPLE DO

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, THEY WOULD OBTAIN A DISEASE FREE LIVELIHOOD.

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stress-related illnesses
rapid pace
pressure
balance
omnipresent
information overload
disconnect
economic uncertainties
job insecurity
financial stress
environmental factors
chronic stress
work-life balance
flexible working hours
mental health
support programs
physical activity
healthy eating habits
awareness
accessibility
counseling
stress management
community environment
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