You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear

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Robertson, I am writing

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letter to express my interest with regard to the vacant

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positon

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to be one of the social

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in our

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training programme. It would be a great experience and help for my starting career. As you know, I have been selected as one of the

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of our institution to attend

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the said training I would like to request

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the guidelines about the criteria in connection with the selection of the events social organiser. The list of guidelines would help me to represent myself as

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best choice to be in the said position. Looking back, during my college days, I have been exposed to different kinds of events as an organiser.

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, different

oraganisation

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in the university has awarded me as one of the best events

oraganiser

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which pushed me to take courses in relation with

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things. I hope that you would consider my request. Yours faithfully, Riah Mae P. Butalid

MaeTue Jun 23 2020

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