You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

Dear
Mr.
Change the punctuation
Mr
show examples
Robertson, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest with regard to the vacant
Correct your spelling
position
show examples
positon
Correct your spelling
position
show examples
to be one of the social
organiser
Change to a plural noun
organisers
show examples
in our
month
Replace the word
monthly
show examples
training programme. It would be a great experience and help for my starting career. As you know, I have been selected as one of the
representative
Change to a plural noun
representatives
show examples
of our institution to attend
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the said training I would like to request
about
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the guidelines about the criteria in connection with the selection of the events social organiser. The list of guidelines would help me to represent myself as
a
Change the article
the
show examples
best choice to be in the said position. Looking back, during my college days, I have been exposed to different kinds of events as an organiser.
Also
, different
oraganisation
Correct your spelling
organisation
in the university has awarded me as one of the best events
oraganiser
Correct your spelling
organiser
which pushed me to take courses in relation with
such
things. I hope that you would consider my request. Yours faithfully, Riah Mae P. Butalid
Submitted by Mae on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: