Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle. Which of these do you prefer? What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and bicycle?

Travelling is a worldwide phenomenon. Everyone in
this
world
use
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uses
distinct mode
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a distinct mode
distinct modes
of transport to commute from one place to another. There are some who opt for
car
for their day to day travelling whereas others use
bicycle
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a bicycle
bicycles
. In my view
bicycle
is far better than the
car
.
This
essay will discuss the pros and the cons of a
car
and a
bicycle
followed by a reasoned conclusion. Considering about the benefits, multifarious merits are there
of
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by
given
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giving
two means of transport.
Car
, being a four wheeler, provide comfort and safety during the journey.
That is
to say, if a person is travelling by
car
,
then
he/she is sitting inside the
car
, like a mini cabin, on soft seats and enclosed. In
this
way,
car
can be considered as a comfortable and safer vehicle.
However
, benefit of
bicycle
cannot be denied, as it is
environmental
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environmentally
friendly.
In other words
, no any fuel is needed to run a
bicycle
.
Consequently
, it does no have any deleterious impact on
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
. Talking about the drawbacks, a couple of
demits
make a depression into
dents
are
also
there of choosing
car
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a car
and
bicycle
for travelling. One fundamental predicament of using
car
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a car
is that it
affect
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affects
negatively to the environment. To put it another way, since crude oil is required to make an automobile work;
hence
a
car
releases fumes and other hazardous gases which contaminate the air.
Besides
,
bicycle
too has some weaknesses. It does not provide safety to the commuter. A person may encounter either an accident or injury while going on a
bicycle
. To be more specific, a friend of mine met with an accident
last
year, when he was going to school on a
bicycle
. He was hit by a truck when he was on
his way school
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his way to school
. He got badly injured. To recapitulate, after analysing strengths and weaknesses of
car
and
bicycle
in depth, it is evident that
although
car
is comfortable, yet I would favour
bicycle
because it has no detrimental impact on
earth's milieu
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the earth's milieu
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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