Many teenagers are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job. What are the advantages and disadvantages of teenagers working part-time?
Many parents motivate their adolescent to work as a part-time employee. There are some benefits and drawbacks of starts working at
such
a young age, like earning money, becoming responsible and, acquire excellent communication skills but divert young minds from studies and become psychologically disturbed.
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doing part-time jobs gives a sense of responsibility and capability to efficiently save their hard-earned money, which is undoubtedly the most useful skill for their future. Linking Words
However
, these skills can easily divert them from the study, Linking Words
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as; many posts require to stand for an extended period along with heavy lifting. After standing for a long time, their body will be tired and lethargic, like many youngsters working part-time at Linking Words
Mac Donalds
and Tim Hortons. Suggestion
the Mac Donalds
As a result
, they cannot follow their studies with the utmost attention and slowly and gradually diverts from it and sometimes left their studies in the middle.
Though many parents believe that more work experience will lead to more satisfaction and help to acquire a better position, we can easily see that the converse true. Young minds become hungry for making more and more wealth as they are working more; they dream of promoting to a supervisor or manager level at Linking Words
such
a young age; so they can be happier. Linking Words
Consequently
, they are stuck in a manager role when they reach their thirties. Later in life, they cannot progress Linking Words
further
in their career because they do not have the required professional qualifications. The manager post is usually a limit for a public-oriented business like grocery stores, food stores, or clothing stores.
They are always prone to abusive comments or people's rude behaviour. In general, a kid on the cash counter and drive-in deliveries have to encounter the customers directly, and every buyer exhibits a different attitude towards them. Some nicely behave, and some are very rude and abusive. A component of customer service, which is the crucial part of any food or grocery store jobs, is the critical component and must be followed by every employee. Linking Words
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, a worker has to be polite to every customer as a part of their job. Linking Words
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abusive behaviour makes the adolescent psychologically hurt and frustrated. And as their age progresses, they will Linking Words
similarly
react to others what they have been through when they were young. Later in life, they can acquire psychological dilemmas like social phobias, selective mutism, or maybe worse than that.
In conclusion, many parents want their teenagers to work part-time; it has some pros and cons, like earning more money and become responsible and satisfied. At the same time, some adolescent may leave their studies and can be frustrated later in life.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...