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Many people say smoking should be banned and some say it is not a good idea. What is your opinion on this?

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Recently
,
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,
there has been a bad trend among young people about the smoking problem to copy the style of adults.
This
 is essential that people need to concern at the moment due to bad affection of tobacco to our
health
.
Therefore
 the government and the public should ban all cigar advertising to control
this
 issue. The more reason why
cigarette
 advertising should be banned that it is not good for
health
. It contains a large toxic which causes many respiratory diseases
such
 as lung cancer, heart illness,.. Soon. It affects both smokers and passive smokers. The
next
 reason should ban
cigarette
 advertising that it may lead to a dangerous issue namely drug addiction. One of all components of
cigarette
 is Nicotine which makes people is difficult to quit smoking when you start to use it. Many experts checked and collected the same evidences about
this
 matter. According to the statistics the number of young people smoking in the eighteen to twenty years old is getting increased by 20% up 70%. Smoking directly impact to teenagers'
health
. It is a part of decreasing physical and brain development of one, which lead to a decline in academic result. What do we do to control
this
 mater? Perhaps the best solution to
this
 problem is the education of young people concern the danger of bad habit. Especially, heavy tax should be placed on
cigarette
 advertising so that the teenager would not be able to afford them. The government
also
 should be banned to protect public
health
 and future owners of the country.
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