You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: •Introduce yourself and your family •Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find •Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

#country #work #house #property #agent #•introduce #•describe #type #accommodation #hope #•give #location

Dear Mr. Pink, I am writing

this

letter to you as you know I am coming to Canada with my family, for work reasons.

Furthermore

, There are six members, my mother, father and four siblings including me.

Apart from

this

, we are looking for a five-room house, which will have a big kitchen as my family is big and a swimming pool because my brothers love swimming on a daily basis. Especially, home theatre is compulsory for us because we spend our leisure time . I

also

want enough area for car parking.

In contrast

, my siblings and my father all are working in City Center. So, it will be good, if you find a home in the suburbs as we do not want to waste our time on travelling or fairs and it is like stress for us. I'd be thankful for you to understand our needs. Thanks in advance, Yours sincerely, Red.

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coherence cohesion

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task achievement

Provide specific examples where possible to better illustrate your needs.

task achievement

The letter provides a clear introduction and explanation of the family's needs.

suitable writing tone

Polite and formal tone is consistently maintained throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

The use of paragraphs helps in organizing thoughts logically.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

154 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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