Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Many believe that buying unwanted things due to the good impression of
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the advertisement
,
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do not require them, whereas some people say advertisement reveal many recent products that are beneficial and
also
make our daily
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lives
easier
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I believe it is a progressive development which we are going to discuss in the span of
this
essay. We are living in the 21st century where science has given us many wonderful inventions to make our
life
easier
,
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,
and we won't be able to know about these greatest discoveries without advertisement of the commodity.
such
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Such
as Television, washing machine, refrigerator. We cannot deny the fact that our
life
would be more challenging without them as old traditional ways are difficult and time consuming and a lot of effort needed to perform them. People of our century are educated enough to choose the good products their
life
has became a robot and they always lack of time for every thing ,
however
advertisements can mould them to buy the lucrative products whether they are quality manufactured and time saving, there are lots of advertising for the similar products which creates chaos and confusion for a consumer to decide what to buy and what to not. But it's always good to do some pre-exercise about the profit and compare. Though marketing of product encourages us to take the things from the market,
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however however we
do not need them and it
also
creates some awareness and comparison from range of products so that customers can decide what is the best buy product. As it is going to be the part of their
life
and eventually made that easy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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