Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

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Many believe that buying unwanted things due to the good impression of

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the advertisement

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however however, we

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do not require them, whereas some people say advertisement reveal many recent products that are beneficial and

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make our daily

living

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lives

easier

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I believe it is a progressive development which we are going to discuss in the span of

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essay. We are living in the 21st century where science has given us many wonderful inventions to make our

life

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easier

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and we won't be able to know about these greatest discoveries without advertisement of the commodity.

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such

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as Television, washing machine, refrigerator. We cannot deny the fact that our

life

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would be more challenging without them as old traditional ways are difficult and time consuming and a lot of effort needed to perform them. People of our century are educated enough to choose the good products their

life

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has became a robot and they always lack of time for every thing ,

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advertisements can mould them to buy the lucrative products whether they are quality manufactured and time saving, there are lots of advertising for the similar products which creates chaos and confusion for a consumer to decide what to buy and what to not. But it's always good to do some pre-exercise about the profit and compare. Though marketing of product encourages us to take the things from the market,

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do not need them and it

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creates some awareness and comparison from range of products so that customers can decide what is the best buy product. As it is going to be the part of their

life

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and eventually made that easy.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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274 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

encourage
persuade
manipulative
unnecessary
excessive
artificial needs
desires
consumers
oversaturation
impulse buying
financial problems
inform
educate
features
benefits
innovations
raise awareness
social issues
positive behavior
enrich
well-being

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that advertising is extremely succesful at persuading as to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries the proportion of older people is increasing. Could this have more Postive or negative effects on society?

There are more new towns nowadays, it is more important to include public parks and sports for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional complementary forms of medicines’ are now widely known and used. The effectiveness of these kinds of treatment is determined by the patient’s mental attitude towards it. To what extent you agree or disagree?