Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Topic: More and more wild

animals

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are on the verge of

extinction

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and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for

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? What can be done to solve

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problem

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A wide range of wild

animals

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are to disappear or have the risk of

extinction

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in the near future. Some inevitable factors play an important role

on

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the elimination of

animals

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. Some reasons why the risk of

extinction

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grows are various, the most necessary one,

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, is hunting

animals

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by people for their valuable leather or parts of

body

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. Demand for natural

materials

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of high quality increases today and people find

the

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solution

on

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hunting wild

animals

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and using them for business purposes regarding

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the teeth

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of elephants,

leather

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the leather

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of tigers, etc.

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result

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thousands of

animals

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are killed by human beings. Luckily, the ways of solving

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problem have been discussed for years and discussions have ended with several resolutions which might reduce the hunting of

animals

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. The best way to fix the problem would be the change of demand for

materials

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of

animals

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which means any companies or works should produce products without using

materials

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of animal origin,

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instead

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waste must be recycled and reused.

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, some solid

materials

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might be used

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making some house decorations or kitchen

tool

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, but not

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the horns of some

animals

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that are durable and resilient for conditions.

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, hunters will not find

partner

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to sell their

materials

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and kill

animals

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, as well.

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, the process may turn back to the positive way that

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the risk

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of animal

extinction

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will stop soon. In conclusion, there are many kinds of solutions

about

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this

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circumstance,

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however

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my point is the most significant one among them.