Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Topic: More and more wild

animals

are on the verge of

extinction

and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for

this

? What can be done to solve

this

problem

.

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A wide range of wild

animals

are to disappear or have the risk of

extinction

in the near future. Some inevitable factors play an important role

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the elimination of

animals

. Some reasons why the risk of

extinction

grows are various, the most necessary one,

however

, is hunting

animals

by people for their valuable leather or parts of

body

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. Demand for natural

materials

of high quality increases today and people find

the

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solution

on

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hunting wild

animals

and using them for business purposes regarding

teeth

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of elephants,

leather

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the leather

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of tigers, etc.

As a

result

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thousands of

animals

are killed by human beings. Luckily, the ways of solving

this

problem have been discussed for years and discussions have ended with several resolutions which might reduce the hunting of

animals

. The best way to fix the problem would be the change of demand for

materials

of

animals

which means any companies or works should produce products without using

materials

of animal origin,

instead

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waste must be recycled and reused.

For instance

, some solid

materials

might be used

on

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making some house decorations or kitchen

tool

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, but not

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the horns of some

animals

that are durable and resilient for conditions.

Consequently

, hunters will not find

partner

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partners

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to sell their

materials

and kill

animals

, as well.

Therefore

, the process may turn back to the positive way that

risk

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of animal

extinction

will stop soon. In conclusion, there are many kinds of solutions

about

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this

circumstance,

however

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my point is the most significant one among them.