Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people suppose that the major environmental problem in our time is the

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of some species of animals and plants. Others think that there are more issues

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. Personally, I strongly agree with both arguments because they’re both reasonable. The

extinction

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of some plants and animals is a

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the environment because of its impact.

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, the over hunting that leads to the change in the food chain in the animal world. It is because that the disappear of herbivores, and that leads to the lack of food for the predators. Despite of

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loss, some people still think the natural still remain unharmed if there still have animals to feed ourselves. In fact, some fisherman on around the world overdo their job so there’re some types of fishes are on the edge of

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or completely extinct,

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, the blue whale.

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the same time, with the excessive harvest, we’re destroying the plant world.

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, to build our city and house we have to mine mountains, flattened the forest, cut down trees to collect wood to build.

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, the loss of wild animals and

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plants, places

us under the pressure to build the zoo to keep them safe in captivity. Under other

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, we have poisoned other aspects of environments

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as water, soil, air. The result of our action is a variety of other environmental problems on the Earth. On top of

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climate change, it is the reason of for the rise in temperature, and leads to a detrimental impact on both humans and animals. The climate change

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causes more serious disasters

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as drought, thunderstorm, earthquake and flood, which affect to the agriculture and living of human and other species.

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, air pollution and water pollution cause harmful impacts on lives as lack of clean water and asthma as well. In conclusion, I think that the loss of some plants and animals should be warned, but it is just the consequence of more important environmental problems. I think we should concentrate our efforts on those problems rather than only focus on the animals and plants’

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