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It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Travelling has been become a more popular in
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 as it helps to improve the thinking and analysis of a particular
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. Let us dig deeper in order to understand the importance of a travelling in
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's life.
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 with, the basic and most prominent reason behind travelling is to explore a novel culture, food and
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 of a city or
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country
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a country
. As
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 is aware that the norms and regulation of a celebration is a unique while the essence of love is similar, since
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 of love and kindness cannot be distinct. To illustrate,
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 year I went to Nepal, I was not able to communicate because of a
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 barrier.
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, people were welcoming nature and try to make me understand their
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 by using sign
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. That time I was shocked with the hospitality of the people of Nepal.
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, I learned a lot of things from them, learn about their rituals and made few new friends. In additions, an approach towards working standard as well as techniques to solve a
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 is different in every
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. The reason behind
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 is a logical thinking along with analysis of a particular
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.
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, like in our
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,
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the first thing
 people do when they faced a
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 is search on the internet, while some people of another
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 prefer to get desired knowledge from their senior members of the respective department.
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 is a method is opted by the people in their workplaces. In conclusion, I strongly hold a view that travelling plays an essential role in gathering new things irrespective of cultural difference and
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 barrier.
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, it helps
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 to acquire a new set of techniques and method for problems.

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