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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

#internet #information
Due to the dramatic development of the technology,
internet
 is a major platform to media there information has reached everywhere in the world within a shorter period of time. No doubt there is a plethora of adverse effects created by the website users. That has been affected the society drastically. Which was not existed before, because lack of knowledge about website use among the society. There are various complicated problems associated with the
internet
 usage,
such
 as lack of individual privacy due to misuse of social media. The Childrens cross their barriers due to lack of security system in the world wide web. They easily can access adult sites
,
Accept space
,
finally
 they will end up as antisocial behavioural children. None other than that, have institutions and banks
also
 have limited security system due to open usage of
internet
. Hackers can enter into their system and they have access to trace the customer’s personal details. Government has to implement various legislation for social media users. Misusing social media and spreading fake news should be a punishable offence. Children have to be strictly observed by their parents and teachers. Awareness programme has to be conducted in the schools among children about dangers due to misuse of
internet
Suggestion
the internet
. My conclusion is using
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 in a correct way will minimize the problem among the society.
Internet
 education should be introduced into the school to violate the students to protect them from a fall into danger.In my opinion, if a one wants to write the news in social media their information should be collected to identify the person
.
Accept space
.
 Strict rules and regulation should be implemented for hackers.
Submitted by Karththikka on

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