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Some people think that it would be better if whole family(Ex.Uncle,aunt and grand parents) involving in bringing up children rather than only parents. Give your opinion ?

#people #uncle #aunt #parents #children
From most people point of view
its
it is
it's
 a good idea to raise the
child
 in joint family
instead
 of only by parents or in
nuclear family
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a nuclear family
nuclear families
the nuclear family
.I
also
 believe that
child
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children
a child
 should be grew up in
joint family
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a joint family
.
Firstly
,
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,
there are many benefits
to
Suggestion
of
child
 as well as parents too to live in joint family as if there are grandparents in home
child
 know how to deal with old people
.
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.
Moreover from
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Moreover, from
 grandparents there are
alot
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a lot
 of new things to learn
.
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.
In today's
time
 everyone is working so
it
it is
it's
 difficult for parents to take care of their
child
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children
 properly
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 after finishing
job
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the job
a job
 they have to do household work
thus
 they find it difficult to give
time
 to their
child
. If they are live with their aunt it seems easy for parents to handle all their work
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 all work would be divided between them.
In addition
 to
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
child
 raised in
friendly environment
Suggestion
a friendly environment
 which is very important for mental health.
Secondly
, grandparents
also
 spend their quality
time
 with children and revoke memories from their childhood too
.
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.
 As we all know there are numerous old age home for grandparents where they
dont
do not
don't
 get the family environment and
concern so
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concern, so
 if they live with their family they would feel more joyful.
on
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On
 the other side some parents prefer to raise
child
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a child
children
by
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of
 their
own which
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own, which
 is
also
 not
bad but
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bad, but
 in
this
child
dont
do not
don't
 get
chance
Suggestion
a chance
 to more interaction with other people as well as it
make
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makes
child
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children
the child
 more shy as he limit to only his parents. In
nutshell
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a nutshell
,
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,
in
this
 phase of
time
 if
child
 raised up in
joint family its not
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a joint family, its not
a joint family its not
 only good for his mental health but it
also
 leads to joyful life.
Submitted by Raman Jit on

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