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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.

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In
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 modern world, technology influences more people comparing to the past, which is taking all our leisure time to keep us relaxed and deviating from the work. Though the television has a plethora of advantages, people are using only for entertainment. I strongly agree with
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 statement and provide my views. In the bygone era, transmission was extremely difficult where people used pigeon as a messenger, later they used postcards and letters, but communication is now easy. The television and radio used as a communication channel in the
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 decades. These channels
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 an opportunity for artists like dancers, comedians, dramatists and so on.
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, it has a variety of features
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 as live broadcasts of sports, which will help people to see the event from where they live, world news and the documentaries about various animals through the national geographic channel. Nowadays, in a family, both men and women are working, so that the children are used to watch the cartoon programs and other video channels, which is preventing them on the physical activity.
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, the variety of channels telecasting the family oriented serials, which addicts them to move on to others. Due to the technological growth, we can see all the films in high-definition quality from home and play the video games through the internet with others.
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, people are becoming lazy and there is no time to interact with friends and other people. To conclude, the technology growth provides more advantages than disadvantage, but it is based on the human usage. A person has to decide how to use all kinds of channels and their time with family.
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