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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. write at least 250 words.

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With the increasing rate of globalization and urbanization, people virtually come closer to each other. Many people have already started E-papers and e-books due to the easy technology and advancement, but there are so many other people who still believe in the print out versions of reading materials. These two types have their own advantages and disadvantages and we will discuss both in detail within
this
 essay.
First
 of all, it is true that hard copy versions of reading materials are outdated as they are not as easy to access as online versions. The online information can be easily reviewed by editorials and the mistakes can be easily solved. Readers can be more rapidly updated through latest news. Readers can access the newspapers and books while sitting at any corner in the world because of the easy approach to the internet.
On the other hand
, there are many disadvantages of online reading
such
 as the false information on the internet. There are no posting rules on the browsers and any anonymous person can post the wrong particulars. The increasing rate of cyber crimes is
also
 worrisome.
thirdly
Suggestion
Thirdly
, there are many people who still like to read in the form of hard copy. Many people like to collect old newspaper artefacts and comics. Collecting those reading materials is their hobby and gives them satisfaction. Few people
also
 think that reading virtual materials will affect their visual aids. In conclusion, it is true that more and more people are using online materials and in the future, it will only increase in significant amount due to the reasons described above. But there will be always a few people who will never stop to buy a print out versions of reading material.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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