Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

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is becoming part of our society. In

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last few years

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the last few years

, It is being noticed that a large majority of people taking benefit of

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invention

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Indeed, most of the people are browsing on the

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for News reading.But

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some people think that

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is still playing an important role in gathering information.

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, I disagree with

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notion and In

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essay we will discuss about the merits of news reading via the

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, It is the wonderful invention by human beings. Through

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platform a person can be connected to anyone world wide.It would not be wrong to say that now a days, people do not have sufficient time, especially for reading periodicals because of their hectic scheduled.

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, at present everyone's having a smart phone and a laptop and both gadgets have an access to high speed

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, through

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service they are reading news easily while during travelling, eating and driving moment a person can hear the news too.

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, It is the time saving and

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a person can get every minute update on just a single click.

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, In an iPhone, developer has built a software named as News, It is a mobile application

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providing an access to real time latest news nationally and internationally.

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, reading and grabbing information online is a pretty good experience. On the other side, people still have interest in newspapers, but as compared to earlier centuries now the growth of a

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is falling down due to the impact of technology. There are manifold of reason behind

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degradation of the press.

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with, a

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is a very slow process, for

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new information people have to wait for

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day publishing.

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, the cost of

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is high as compared to the

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, The Hindustan Times, an Indian

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, the cost of

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paper is approximately Rs35, but if we go

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with

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same amount company's are offering 1Gb data and it is a very big space for surfing.

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, we are saving trees for a better environment so we are encouraging the use of digital platform discouraging the use of paper. To recapitulate, In

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era, people are mostly like to see digital paper and because of

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the journal leads to negative development. And In the coming years new generation will surely support for an online platform for better access.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

You recently purchased an item from a local store, but you are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the manager of the store. In your letter: Describe the item you bought and why you need it. Explain why you are not happy with it. Say what you would like the manager to do.

Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Describe a process of geothermal power plant ? What is the diagram of? How many steps are there? What happens in each step? What are the components, or parts of the process? Is the process mechanical or natural, or both? Where does the process start? Where does it finish?