Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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A highly controversial issue today relates to the influence that
publicity
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of any kind has on humanity. In
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essay I am going to examine
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question from both points of view and
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give my opinion on the matter. On one side of the argument they are people who argue that the benefit of advertising considerably outweighs its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
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is the price advantage. It is
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possible to say that
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gives
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is given
to people the advantage of comparing prices of a specific product. One good illustration of
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is when someone wants to purchase an
item but
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item, but
has doubts about the price and the quality of the product. In that case commercial
publicity
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like Tv spots, radio, or magazine can be very helpful in making the most convenient choose.
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, it is
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possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact that marketing has a bad impact
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on
our lives. People often have
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opinion because they think
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the publicity
is not always true. A
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point is that many of these commercial publicities don’t always have quality in their products. A particularly good example here is from my own experience, when I end up buying a shaving machine for my face. In the add was
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illustrating
how the machine works perfectly without adding any shave cream on your face, and
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that comes with a guaranty for the blades for one year. Of course, I bought that, but just to find out the opposite; the machine
wont
will not
won't
work without adding shaving cream on your face, and of course the blades needed to be replaced after one month. In
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conclusion, I
believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,
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however I
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however, I
feel that
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has a negative impact on humanity.
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is because of the many cases of bad experience, but I believe that good, quality products don’t need excessive exposure on the market.
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