Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A highly controversial issue today relates to the influence that
publicity
of any kind has on humanity. In this
essay I am going to examine this
question from both points of view and then
give my opinion on the matter.
On one side of the argument they are people who argue that the benefit of advertising considerably outweighs its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this
is the price advantage. It is also
possible to say that publicity
gives
to people the advantage of comparing prices of a specific product. One good illustration of Suggestion
is given
this
is when someone wants to purchase an item but
has doubts about the price and the quality of the product. In that case commercial Accept comma addition
item, but
publicity
like Tv spots, radio, or magazine can be very helpful in making the most convenient choose.
On the other hand
, it is also
possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact that marketing has a bad impact in
our lives. People often have Suggestion
on
this
opinion because they think publicity
is not always true. A Suggestion
the publicity
second
point is that many of these commercial publicities don’t always have quality in their products. A particularly good example here is from my own experience, when I end up buying a shaving machine for my face. In the add was illustrate
how the machine works perfectly without adding any shave cream on your face, and Suggestion
illustrating
also
that comes with a guaranty for the blades for one year. Of course, I bought that, but just to find out the opposite; the machine wont
work without adding shaving cream on your face, and of course the blades needed to be replaced after one month.
In will not
won't
conclusion I
believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, Accept comma addition
conclusion, I
however I
feel that Accept comma addition
however, I
publicity
has a negative impact on humanity. This
is because of the many cases of bad experience, but I believe that good, quality products don’t need excessive exposure on the market.Submitted by Ana on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite