Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to suggest the name of

Rajesh

Tyagi for the award, been given to the people who have contributed towards community development. I hope you would consider my suggestion preferably. Let me explain my views to you.

Rajesh

lives in

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Mathur

Manthur

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district of Kolar and has been a pioneer in developing a forest on

a

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barren land. After retiring from

army

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the army

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,

Rajesh

took up

task

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of planting trees to help more animals and birds have a living. The idea brewed in his mind after he attended a national seminar in Delhi about the necessity of flora and fauna in day to day life. In his pursuit for society

happiness

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he has built

water

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reservoir for the local community to fetch water for daily use as the areas

faces

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huge scarcity in summer. Remarkably, people in the area have started building

such

reservoirs in their

home

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too,

modeling

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the original made by

Rajesh

. His daily work and commitment towards

the

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society

is

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well worth the recognition and

hence

I wanted to bring your attention towards his

endevour

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endeavour

for helping

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society. Would you be kind enough to nominate his name in the "Environmental Panther" award as he is definitely worth the award

.

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Thank you for your consideration.

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Your

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faithfully, Pankaj Raghav