Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Thanks to technological progress,
information
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plays a more important role than it used to be in modern times. Some said that
information
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should be
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share
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shared
as much as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world.
Nevertheless
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, others think that some
information
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can not
can not
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be shared freely since it is too important or too valuable. In my opinion,
society
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can be
benifited
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benefited
benefitted
by sharing
information
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in different fields.
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, if we
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some important
information
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, it will cause
troubles
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trouble
to our
society
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. For starters, sharing
information
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can benefit our
society
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in many ways.
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of all, people can combine the
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from different fields and create
new way
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new ways
a new way
to apply.
For instance
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, scientists can use environment data and
agriculture
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agricultural
data to predict the food price, so that
government
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the government
can apply some policies to mitigate poverty and famine issues.
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, researchers can work more efficiently due to sharing
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. They do not need to do the same research to get the data, since these are public
information
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. If the
information
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can be
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share
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shared
to public, it can benefit our
society
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and make it be more efficient.
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, some important
information
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should not be shared
to
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in
public. It may hurt the
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particular, organize
or individual, if their important
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are shared
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is shared
.
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, if a restaurant's special recipe is shared to public, its competitors will copy it. So that, these
restaurant
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restaurants
will lose feature. In the result, no restaurants want to develop
new recipe
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new recipes
a new recipe
.
This
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phenomenon can
also
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happen in other fields, not just happen in restaurants. As the result, If we
share
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all
information
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, even include the
too
being one more than one
two
valuable one, it will make our
society
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has no motivate to create something new. In conclusion, sharing
information
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can make our
society
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more efficient.
However
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, it can reduce innovation, if we
share
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the important or too valuable
information
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to public.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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