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The quality of life in large cities is decreasing Why is it decreasing And what measures can be taken to solve this problem

#quality #life #cities #measures
Nowadays
it is growing concern
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it is a growing concern
 that individuals in enormous cities
is not leading
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are not leading
 a quality
life
. There are pros
such
 as high
renumaration
something that remunerates
remuneration
 and amenities at the same time cons
also
 there with huge population.
This
 essay will discuss the problem in city
life
 and its remedial measures to reverse the trend. To commence with, the main reason for decreasing the standard
life
 is increasing of population.
the
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The
youngersters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
 from rural areas are migrating to cities for their occupation and high
life
 style.
inaddition
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In addition
Inaddition
 to that
cities
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city
 has adequate medical system.
prime
Suggestion
Prime
 example is the
renumuration
a numbered list
enumeration
remuneration
, Rural areas could pay less wages which is not adequate for youngsters to live trendy
life
.
moreover they
Accept comma addition
Moreover, they
Moreover they
 would prefer to socialize more which is possible in cities.
all
Suggestion
All
 the above points discussed are major concerns of people’s living in cities. The best remedial measures
is developing
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are developing
 the rural areas with all amenities
such
 as enormous companies and shopping malls and so on
,
Accept space
,
authorities should concentrate more on rural areas by developing infrastructure with elevated health care facilities and shopping malls to cover the
youngsters
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youngster's
 attention.
authorities
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Authorities
 should provide free space for the companies to motivate them to start in rural areas
,
Accept space
,
for instance
 province like Quebec mainly promotes areas and providing better infrastructure to companies like amazon and google. In conclusion authorities should
planned
Suggestion
plan
 well to develop the
life
 of people in cities at the same time rural areas
also
 given
same care
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the same care
 to stop the migrants.
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