You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

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Dear Sir, I have joined your company 15 days back as a fresher. As I am new to

this

organization, I have many queries about the project, but my

seniors

do not give me proper attention, which is affecting my performance. Being a new joiner in the company, I want that proper training should be given to me

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seniors

, which helps me enhance my understanding related to the current assignment.

In addition

, I should be given some mock assignments to evaluate my understanding of the current project.

However

, my

seniors

not only ignore my questions related to my job but

also

make fun of me, which diminishes my confidence.

Therefore

, I am requesting you to please arrange proper training sessions to alleviate my know-how about the project.

In addition

, please arrange a meeting or communicate with

seniors

to assist me with my queries, which helps me contribute to my daily assigned task and

also

grow my confidence. I am hoping for a positive response from you. Regards, James Bond

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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