CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT

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CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT

Fully explain your ideas

All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned, and electric cars should replace them.

Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree?

In some cultures, Children are encouraged to compete against each other. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this approach?

Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.