You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar. In your letter: Ask for detailed information regarding the program contents. Cost of the program and any discounts for company-sponsored professionals. Provision of accommodation during the program.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to request some detailed information about the seminar I will be participating

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week in Canada.

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of all, I would gain some detailed knowledge about the topics that are going to be discussed in the meeting.

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will help me to prepare myself and represent our company in a professional manner. As I was planning my budget, I am

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interested to know about the expenses that I will incur out of my pocket for

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trip, and if there are any discounts that I would be eligible for as a company-sponsored professional.

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, can you please throw some light on the type of accommodation I will be provided while my stay in Canada

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is my

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time travelling to

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country, so I was a bit worried about it. Yours Faithfully, Roxana Golusin.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

143 words

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