In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

Selecting a place to live in is a big decision to make. In some parts of the world, people value

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their own accommodation because it is a sense of achievement rather than renting which could not save money in the long run. From my perspective, house ownership is a natural human desire. First and foremost, many individuals seek to own their personal house where they

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live with peace of mind.

Although

they may struggle to acquire it,

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many people tend to purchase homes as per their

need

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.

For instance

, in many

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countries, people mortgage and take loans from the banks to purchase property.

Whereas

, living as a tenant, not only one must

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abide

the

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rules and regulations set by the landlords, but

also

individual can not renovate or repair

according to

his

need

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.

Thus

, it is imperative to have a

home

where one can live peacefully.

Nonetheless

, I believe that having a

home

has many positive aspects

such

as it gives freedom in doing many things. Persons will not

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bound to anyone's rules and regulations and owners have the opportunity to renovate frequently. Taking myself as an example, when I was living in the suburbs of Auburn, Sydney, I

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even move a refrigerator from

kitchen

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to

other place

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, so having personal accommodation is necessary to thrive in

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society.

Furthermore

, the sense of satisfaction can be felt in our own building which could be missing in renting

apartment

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so,

this

will make the owner feel more relaxed.

Hence

, owning a

home

gives satisfaction.

To sum up

, a place to live

is

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truly depend on the dwellers

either if

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they live as a tenant or

having

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his

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own flat.

However

, renting a

home

could not

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save finances

while

ownership can save money.