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Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that the
internet
 has risen in popularity over the past few decades.
Although
 burgeoning
information
 about traditions and past values can be found on the
internet
, I believe that only by going to museums, people would realize the real exuberance. As the
internet
 is becoming increasingly popular,
most
Suggestion
more information
information
 could be obtained from it rather than going to a museum.
This
 is because there is plenty of
information
 available online, and perhaps people could receive almost all
information
 via digital platforms. Not only social networks have local details, but they have
also
 got a lot of data about global history.
As a result
,
this
 is likely to reduce the necessity of visit museums and art galleries.
For example
, Wikipedia is widely popular for providing facts about all kinds of
information
 about culture and history.
Thus
, the argument goes in a way that museums may no longer require to provide
such
 facts. Yet, I believe that museums still play a vital role in providing much-needed details. Since sentiments on the relics of the past cannot be realized by watching them through computer screens, it can only be felt by seeing them through physical eyes and touching them with bare hands. As a tangible example, the excitement of extinct species,
such
 as dinosaurs can only be realized by touching their remains of bones in the museums.
This
 will create motivation for the past, and it is likely to encourage people to pursue more and more archaeological evidence so that the world could unfold interesting relics.
Therefore
, we cannot completely deny exhibits. In conclusion, despite having all
information
 on the
internet
 that could make people's life more convenient, the real excitement is felt only by visiting museums and monuments.
Therefore
, exhibits are required.
Submitted by thiru narayanan on

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